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All Deviations
All Deviations


They know not of what they speak....
they only do as they're told.....
but now, their time has come.
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It was 2011 when it all fell apart...
the people, the sky, the whole world just fell to pieces..
it just crumbled...everything...and  the crazy part was...
that only a few choice people seem to remember it at all.
even after 100 years.....
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It's been almost 12 weeks since i stumbled into this little "Town of sunshine"
The town, which was actually more of a village then anything, was vastly deserted. There was evidence of a once thriving population, though.
Tall, statuesque monuments and building, demolished beneath a broad and powerful oppression.
All seemed trampled and desumate under the lenghty stagnation the people here call life.
It was as if the towns people had forgotten what had happened, or better yet, if the event had ever occured at all..
A tragedy really, especially for the older members of Cytric.....
b> "Hey rookie!! Get your head out of the clouds! you've got laterines to scrub! Chief Vandana stormed
" Laterines? Our precinct doesn't even have LATERINES....." I questioned
The chief opened a door and as if by magic, i came upon a precinct bathroom...
"I didn't know we hada bathroom! Oh Come On!!" I whined.

For I've worked here for about 3 months, and I've had to walk 4 miles down town just to use the bathroom...

and there was one here the whole time...i could feel my face reden, when the chief "placed me "<more like shoved me, but if you j00 ask him joo'll get a different answer> into the bathroom...and before i could get my head back on straight, He locks the door. LOCKS THE DOOR!!!! I ran to the door.... desperatly clawing at the it, when I here from the other side: "That bathroom better shine...I want the toilets so clean I can eat off of them....as I intend to." And with that last eyetwitching, unwanted piece of info. I walked over to the first stall, which looked like a fudge eating contest had taken place, and then the winner came back to take care of business. I looked down into the porcline toilet brush holder, ready to go to work, and indisgust  find : My Toothbrush.!!!..TT_______TT

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I'm gonna submit something!!!
its a rough outline of the first charper of a comic I'm going to do/ have been working on for weeks:typehyper:
WEEKS!!!!! :sadangel:
ITS NOT ACTUALLY THE DRAWED:painter:<WAT WOOD BE THE RITE FORM OF THE WORD DRAW FOR THIS SENTANCE?>;pICTURE, BUT THE ACTUAL STORY. " :confused:
i'VE SHOWN IT TO A COUPLE PEOPLE, AND GOTTEN GOOD REMARKS, AND EVEN IF THEY WEREN'T SO GOOD....
I WOODA STILL SUBMITTED...^^;
FOR MY OWN ENJOYMENT/PEACE OF MIND :movingon:
Well i still hope some people enjoy it
and i openly welcome constructive critizism :faint:
Well lets get this pony rolling.....:omfg:
:lmao:SHUT UP... it makes perfect sense :stupid::sprint:
and....and.....and....:cake:
Well until the next edit!

-Erin :wave:
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~LilacedViolence:iconLilacedViolence: Mar 26, 2008, 6:14:02 PM
Ignore the furry...she has nothing to do with the story...or does she:confused:......i need to fix the way i divided everything..aybe it wood be better if i didnt divid it....i dunno.. it's not the same person talking...aww man:cry:....i need 2 fix sum things,....:cling:
well the rest is up to the readers, if any <:fingerscrossed:?> u better believe it
with faith and lov,
Erin
<;p.s.> I FORGOT TO MENTION, AND THIS IS IMPORTANT....NO FLAMES!!!
-THANK YOU,management

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"OH NO.....I Died.....I'll Avenge Myself!!!!< waaah haaaa wah chang..>
~elreylucifer:iconelreylucifer: Mar 26, 2008, 7:13:36 PM
esta muy bien es etretenido y dinamico esta bien

This is very well entertained this dynamic and well
~LilacedViolence:iconLilacedViolence: Mar 26, 2008, 7:18:41 PM
lol
¡¡usted realmente lo quiere decir!!!
¡¡yay!! soy tan feliz
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you really mean it!!!
yay!! i'm so happy

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"OH NO.....I Died.....I'll Avenge Myself!!!!< waaah haaaa wah chang..>
~LilacedViolence:iconLilacedViolence: Mar 26, 2008, 9:24:36 PM
okey, esto es fino conmigo :hug:

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"OH NO.....I Died.....I'll Avenge Myself!!!!< waaah haaaa wah chang..>
~KTgreenstripe:iconKTgreenstripe: Mar 28, 2008, 6:51:17 AM
nasty potty....

Good story erin.

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FEAR THE GREEN STRIPED WONDER DRAGON!!!! FEAR ME!!!!!! :evillaugh:

At war against the Flamers! :flame:

Will come after anyone who messes with the admins :threaten:

AND...and...and......... and loves cookies! :cookie: :w00t!:
~LilacedViolence:iconLilacedViolence: Mar 28, 2008, 1:35:13 PM
lol, yeah potty nasty....:paranoid:
thanks :glomp:
-Erin :wave:

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Don't make me go Byakugan on your asses!!!........
~kotesu:iconkotesu: Apr 18, 2008, 11:56:52 AM Mood: Love
This is gonna be interesting keep up the great work :)

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Power Brings about evil >:)

Speed Outweighs power :spyed:

However the Heart is stronger than both combined :+favlove:

Can you handle it? :spyedvsjark: